Oops, sorry, should have read that and got my post in the right order before putting it up...

Anyway, that can be fixed...on another note if you don't mind Sean I've stuck an extra bit of prose into one of your previous posts (in my Word copy) where Eevee chats to Tsunami and Keiji, and just gives me an excuse to explain how her force lance works:

 

They eventually came across a massive arch marking the end of the busy part of Bevelle and the start the rich district, the arch was guarded heavily from thieves but the minute the guards recognised Tsunami they all passed unchecked.

Eevee ran forward to walk along with Tsunami.

"You…live here?"

"Yeah, my father is a well none tradesmen, he is also the big boss behind the Machina faction,"

“Really?”

“Yes. Though he’s not my real father, I don’t know who my real parents were.”

“Oh,” said Eevee curiously, “So do you even know where you’re from?”

“She fell from heaven.” Keiji said.

That seemed such a ridiculously overblown thing to say that Eevee just stared at him. Tsunami laughed.

“No, he’s being literal. My adoptive father found me lying on a beach near here.”

Eevee looked baffled, while Keiji having heard the story before just shrugged.

“Oh, is that an Atellian weapon?” Tsunami asked, changing the subject as she caught a glimpse under Eevee’s open trench coat of the force lance tucked into her belt.

“Yeah,” Eevee said with a surprised smile, pulling out the rune-inscribed tube and flicking her wrist to extend it into its staff form, “How did you know?”

Tsunami merely winked. Eevee responded with a slanted smile.

“It’s part machina and part magic,” she explained enthusiastically, pointing out the many runes on the weapon’s barrel, “See, if you hold down this rune here it converts magical power into bolts of energy and blasts them out here,” she demonstrated by tapping the gun-like protrusion at the end, “And if you’re a really powerful mage you can tap this rune here and it charges up the whole staff, making it a better melee weapon, but I haven’t mastered that yet.”

Tsunami smiled at her enthusiasm, “I see magic’s not a dying art where you come from, Eevee.”

Eevee smiled at the praise.

Tsunami stopped in front of a great mansion, it was impressive and bigger than many of the houses yet at the same time dwarfed by others.

 

As for the post where Fari's talking to Jacen, maybe while Jacen was chatting with Dante and being generally impressed by Kebel, Dante tells him about an op they've got planned and he begs Fariel to let him come along ("Whatever your differences were, Fariel, whatever drove you to go your separate ways, I'm not my brother." or something like that).

-- Edited by [BOSS]Fenix at 21:31, 2006-11-23

so you all know:

Soren is insane and believes he is a demi-god through his father, and he has joined Penance because he views Soven to be his downfall and he wants help to kill him. 

If anyone writes that they see Soren remember:  under his hood and cloak he wears bright white armour and his eyes are completly white - very important bacause it ties with the back story of Soven father and Soren's father, which i will explain about another time.

Also, dont write too much with Soven cause he needs to do a few things, save Keiji, piss Penance off, fight Soren and be motivated to get an army of pirates together(thats for later)

cheers

One thing I never quite understood - where did Soven get to know Neji?  Were they pirates together on the Highwind for a while?  Or in separate crews but crossed swords a few times?  But no, that was before Neji had his demon powers...

Sometime between the end of AA1 and the start of AA2 then?

Damn Ive wrote alot today lol.

Ok one final note, that Ghede introduced, now what makes him so strong lol. Since he's everyones enemy cause he wants everyones body. He's a made Genius, he has gathered cells from every strong warrior who exsits to date, including the angels, through experiement he has injected all these cells into his body and thus he can use everyones power. His weapon is small blades.

He can;

Timeshift
Shapeshift
Uses elf magic and Demon magic and normal Magic
he even has cells from Tanis and thus can use Life drain
fast
And on a final note he is competely immue to Demon Magic due to an experiment redering even Lightning edge usless

Weakness;
Frail body, the guy can't take a hit thats why he needs to be fast and strong, a scratch can b fatal to him.
He is very weak due to frial body so he has to be fast and he uses only small sharp blades.
So have fun fighting him
Also he doesnt like fighting and leaves it to his prettys.

Cause the shadow arriving and the ppl on board fighting before Neji arrives is part of my plan. Shortly after Neji arrives we gonna have to retreat from island, just to let u know, the death of the three bad guys comes another time heeheehee, why they retreat from island u will have to wait and find out hahaha

Nope I refering to Neji as Neji.

It is yeh, I liked it so I thought i'd put it in.

Nah, I'll leave that out.

Ok guess in the rp, i havent really got anything planned apart from elves finding out that Penance needs Tsunami to become complete and order her to be killed. Keiji obviously wont let them, Keiji runs and fights Elves, he fights Kobie cause ive got a gd idea for that, and eventually Neji and Kobie alow him to escape. And thus they have a sperate adventure of running from Penance.

I gonna put Neji with Tanis ofcourse, and as for Zell, I don't know if he'll go to and you use the Shadow, or he goes off to find Cid in the Shadow, but right now i focusing on him surviving against Gaget.

You killed Melina...? That's so sad :( Didn't quite see that one coming XD LOL

And hehe little girl XD lol

Nvm

Nvm = Nevermind lol. I was on about the other song lyrics you said. I read what you wrote wrong so forget about it lol.

Where do you think the first place they are gonna go, when they run away fool, Tsunami will also get her cross staff when they run away. And not really its 50/50 battle jst to make things interesting, those odds are gonna jump up, then plummet down during the battle away, also the fact that a regualar person is able to stand toe to toe with him makes him angry and more likely to stay and fight, he knows no retreat.

[BOSS]Fenix wrote:

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That last post is actually very good, As  Much better than I could have written it...

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Wow such praise :p I'll make sure that my next one sucks to make up for my odd moment of worth while writing XD LOL

He'll kinda have to coz everyone else buggered off and took the Shadow with them, so he can't get off the island otherwise :P