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RE: AA2 OOC


Not a problem, don't mind the gaps. We had the same problem with the climactic fight of AA1 as well - the need to think of something ace enough meant we spent a long time not posting :)

And yeah you do kinda have to catch up, coz we can't fight Penance without Leviathan :P

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Ok I'll finish that post and will also finish off Set vs Zell, we'll have to work something out that cause ive kinda already written an enterence for Keiji, he runs up and Neji and Penance are locking swords, Neji falls back for breather while Keiji tries his luck with Penance at first Keiji's punches barely make Penance flinch but then he uses his full power and surprises Penance with a punch through a wall.



Eevee could be on the other side of the wall, and be very surprised XD

Where are we having the fight?  Penance's throne room?  His "trophy room" at the heart of the castle where it half-interfaces with the demon world (the place where Feyd and Sonya fought him last time)?  The roof (I get the impression that's where Penance and Neji were)?



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Yeh Neji and Penance are currently on the roof atm, but as with all fights they can drift about, Keiji will face Penance on the roof aswell.

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Fair enough - after all, the roof allows for cool weather effects, airborne combat, more space for Aeons, and a bigger, more impressive Void portal.

Although...some readers might then wonder why we walked all the way through the castle and didn't just fly up onto the roof in the first place biggrin

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Because the angels werent to know where Penance was. The walls guilded Neji and they would do the same for Keiji reconising the demon blood.

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Huh.  Well we can't ALL have demon blood :P

And someone set me a deadline for my next post.  I write much faster when I've got a deadline to work to.



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Just jump ahead so that fariel's caught up. I'll write something eventually but busy with college etc!

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hence the hole in the roof, u can use that.

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Sorry about my ooc rant in the last post, it's just that a lot of our "boss" fights seem to follow the pattern of

WHAM!
*enemy gets up*
How the hell did he survive that!?
WHAM!
<Repeat>

Basically visualise we're now fighting a boss with high Level stats rather than a ton of Hit Points :P

-- Edited by [BOSS]Fenix at 16:20, 2007-10-19

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I could write heaps of stuff, jst i dont like writing for other ppl's characters, so forgive if the parts are Keiji and Neji orientated. Also howz this for a plan;

Fight Penance for abit
Penance transforms into his giant demon form (seen in proloug) this means everyone must summon they're aeons (Keiji obviously wont b able to do so he'll jst go up a gear and buzz around) During this battle Laconfir will contact Gau and Zell telling them to bring the orb to Yuna.
After getting beat in his giant form Penance reverts back to normal form which would lead to the void events.

During above battle Tsunami will likely appear do something to help then fuk off saying she sorry and wont bother any of them again.

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The Underdog wrote:
During above battle Tsunami will likely appear do something to help then fuk off saying she sorry and wont bother any of them again.

Hang on, backtrack?



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she appears heals says sry for the whole betrayal thing, Thanks for not killing me Keiji, I'll leave now and not bother u guys again.

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Told you I hadn't forgotten AA2 ;)

Was just wondering what Penance looks like when in his "uber demon" form. 

Also, when does Tanis show up with all the ghosts of the previous angels (and all the other randoms)?

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well we could go by the game or something else big and scary, that would promt the summoning of the aeons, or we could have him under go a smaller transformation we could still summon the aeons or continue to fight the way we are, the fight jst tougher.

Whether Penance goes giant or not the angels will fight him and manage to beat him down back to origanal form the end result everyone being pretty much ****ed including Penance but due to his crystal his stamina and wounds get better quicker than the angels putting him in a promising postion, also another twist Penance armor is strengthed by the power of the crystal making it impregnable. When a weakened Penance goes to finish angels off that when Tanis makes his return with ghost army (cool enterance could be him and Selina blocking Penance's sword) he says his line and angels get power boost, cue Penance defeat (with boost Neji instantly goes to Retala and Zell's side standing between them and demon army he then blast that portion of demon army with a double Demonic burst edge)

Howz that sound?

-- Edited by The Underdog at 17:14, 2007-11-09

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I've been in a real writing mood today so as well as that long-ass post for Liandri Tournament I also wrote up a couple of paragraphs of cool imagery for AA2 - mainly Penance assuming his uber form (I used the third pic - the big black demon - as inspiration coz I thought it was the coolest).  Now I just need to think up the bit that comes before.  Had a vague idea of Penance casting Dark Clones so everyone can have a go at once.

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I think the major problem I'm having is finding a convincing way for Keiji, Eevee, Neji and Fariel to all fight Penance at once.  Everyone going in one at a time is the easiest to write (everyone does their post in turn) but is a bit unrealistic.  On the other hand I could just write for everyone (like I did against Beelzebub, in Luca and against Mika's army in AA1) but that denies everyone else the chance to write what they want.  Tricky.

One solution I've come up with is to have Penance create four Dark Clones (everyone writes vs their respective clone, and the fact that we're getting our arses kicked by phantoms with only 10% of Penance's power would be a nice touch) but it's only a half-decent solution - I'd rather fight Penance himself - so if anyone's got any ideas please share.

I'm talking about the bit before Penance goes super-size BTW - Sean's plan a couple of posts back for that part onwards is sound enough.

-- Edited by [BOSS]Fenix at 12:43, 2007-11-21

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How about everyone writes things they want to do to Penance and put them all together, mixing the things up abit with some teamwork fighting thrown in.

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Ah, I'd forgotten what it was like to write epic and unrealistic dialogue smile

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I'd forgotten how much fun it was to read your AA posts lol
Still beating up our characters are we? :p

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Well, technically Penance is beating them up...but pretty much yeah :P

Your move.

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Don't rip off too many books and films :P  

We'll know it's getting too much when Neji plants his foot on Penance's chest, puts on his best Gerard Butler voice and shouts "This...is...SPIRA!" before kicking him through the portal...

Was gonna make a more serious point...hmmm, what was it...oh yeah, you may have said what the enchantment was OOC, but you gave it bugger all description in the actual post :P  And I don't know which book you'r talking about cry The closest equivalent we've seen in AA so far is Bisingr du Knifr (which doesn't technically make the blade unbreakable but wraps it in magical flames and makes it cut through other stuff instead) but of course that's a fire spell...

Bah, just assume it's that spiral of water and ice you always seem to mention as swirling round Fariel's swords smile

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It's fun ripping off other peoples things, if i could remember what it was i would tell ya. I'll go back and edit in what i'm talking about with the enchantment thing later when i get a minute.

And it would be fcuking brilliant if Neji did that to Penance!!!!

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Up next is Penance revealing his uber demon form and kicking much ass, which I have half-written and will post soon.

And since Sean didn't link it, I will - this is definitely how it should go:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kWhe62CNeEE

"Swords are no more use here!  We must use...GUITARS!"



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I'm going to ignore everything after: "will post soon" And say, wheres this post then?

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This evening if you're lucky - last exam today :D

EDIT - Nae luck XD Very busy tonight :D

Aww, and you're ignoring half my post?  Didn't you like the idea of Penance going uber, the Angels singing "FuuuuuuuuuuUUUUUUUUUUCK!" then Penance demanding that they suck his ****? LOL

-- Edited by [BOSS]Fenix at 21:34, 2007-12-07

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And there is the promised post, with both the Angels and Penance delivering yet another huge serving of ass-kicking uberness...LOL >.>

Oooh, and some crappy dialogue aww Most of it inspired by The Matrix: Revolutions.

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Might as well post on this one too...

I've thought up a couple of good moments to feature in Angels vs Penance in his demon form, but I'll probably end up doing what I usually do and keep writing as ideas come to me.  Once I've got a full post together I'll let you know.

You guys got anything?

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yeh ive got something but its in bevelle, basically Retala getting words from Laconfir and teaming up with Laguna and Tyrion to save yuna, meanwhile Yendor, Silarion and Alariele meet up with Zell Gau and Alia getting the necro orb through bevelle and to yuna.



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Has everyone's imagination run dry for both RPs, or are people just busy?

Maybe I'll post a couple of paragraphs somewhere, new postage always seems to get people writing again :)

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i posted on LT rp, but stuck now until match starts

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Ah, so you did want to just start the match.  My bad.  Go for it.  I'll get right on my version.

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-- Edited by [BOSS]Fenix at 18:58, 2008-01-19

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