Planning thread for AA2

[BOSS]Asreal · Nuisance

RE: Planning thread for AA2

[BOSS]Fenix · RP Expert

Technically he's naming her after the Japanese word for a tidal wave.

The Underdog · Member

The fifth is called Tsunade. lol. And Tsunade means A mooring Robe.

Im calling her Tsunami jst because it sounds cool as girls name. And note Keiji did not come from Naruto lol. Neither did Melina.

And im on ep 199, ep 200 is available for download 2moze, yay Finally they are doing an alrite Filler which are seriously getting on my tits.

[BOSS]Asreal · Nuisance

Okay so you aren't taking all the names from Naruto but a fare amount of your character stuff is ripped off from it. I'm probably gonna have a bitch of a time with copyright in the comic :p Might have to edit it a bit :/

[BOSS]Fenix · RP Expert

And to make things even worse, Tanis and Selina are one syllable away from infringing on Underworld: Evolution's copyright LOL

No but really they don't bitch too much about it. As the Dan Brown case proved it's perfectly legal to steal ideas, just not the way you write them.

So rip off to your heart's content!

[BOSS]Fenix · RP Expert

The Underdog wrote:

As for his best men, well his officers they could monsters or humanoids, they could be a soul brought back from the farplain (Kiba), an ancient monster sealed in the demon world or an angry guy or past enemy who hasnt been killed given an upgrade, or even a good guy who helped us in the origanal who gets possessed by Penace. Just go wild and come up with something for you to fight.

I've got one evil boss in mind (probably Eevee's, though he could do for all 3 if I can't think up another 2 for Feyd and Sonya) Evil daemonic bastard with wings and horns and big sharp pointy teeth. I've got a vague idea that he was once Atellian (hence the wings) but joined Penance's evil army and got lots of evil powers, so now he's a horribly mutated demon.

For his minions I was going to go for something demonic/bestial (demon-world Fiends or something) so either going to be super-fast reptilian bastards borrowing heavily from Predator, or bloody great gun-toting tanks who can use bazookas as pistols borrowing heavily from Unreal, just for the sheer hell of using lots of rocket launchers!

Haven't decided.

[BOSS]Asreal · Nuisance

If we're going for a big bad boss for each of our Characters i should probably have someone closer to Fariel's line of abilities. I dunno, like a wolf demon kinda thing. They him and Fariel could have a full out wolfy war :p lol Woot! The fur will fly ;) LOL I need sleep x.x The things i'm coming up with shouldn't be allowed out my head.

[BOSS]Fenix · RP Expert

You could fight that 2 (or is it 3?) headed wolf thing that guards the Underworld Or in this case the Farplane.

So, evil boss will be something between this guy:

http://www.t3.rim.or.jp/~rj-taka/WarLord.JPG (unfortunately you can't see his wings from this angle)

And this guy:

http://www.beyondhollywood.com/moviepics4/underworldevolution6.jpg (who you may recognise from Underworld: Evolution)

With his own personal army of either:

http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ic7d-trok/3BRUTES.jpg (the guy who took this pic really frakked up the depth perception LOL)

Or:

http://www.tactical-ops.hu/pictures/monster/monster23-k.jpg (sorry, should have found a bigger one) http://img53.exs.cx/img53/6789/SkaarjMonster1.th.jpg hybridised with http://www.starbase8.de/horror/mm/box/detail_alienpredator_predator.jpg (a better pic)

Any thoughts? Picture quality or lack thereof notwithstanding? LOL

The Underdog · Member

Ive got mine planned out.

Neji - Uber Kiba, he has batter control of Sand, the moves he does are the same as Neji and Keijis demon attacks but with sand.

Keiji - Ancient Demon who is also master of maritial arts, he can grow in size and stretch his limbs.

Zell - An atellian master engineer with lots of fancy weapons, his arm will be a mana gun cannon edged with a sharp blade. A long with his tough armor. He has other techs but wont use most of them, eg Granades, he will also have a Gatling Gun which he will use quite often.

[BOSS]Fenix · RP Expert

You mean something like this bastard?

http://www.sfondideldesktop.com/Images-Games/Unreal-2/Unreal-2-0006/Unreal-2-0006.jpg

The Underdog · Member

The Armor wont b as thick, it will b quite thin and grip to his body. His Mana Gun will be built into his arm. His Wings will be metal, He wont have a helmet, but he will have a mini computer thing attched to his ear and the screen will come round to his left eye, it will be able to detect magical energys and give an assessment of its threat level, it also records the oppents

while fighting someone or watching someone fight the computer automatically records every move the oppent makes, it creates a profile for every person he has seen in battle, after recording battle tactics and techniques the computer tells him of a counter to use. It will look like this

http://moddb.com/images/cache/mods/19/1986/gallery/thumb_6266.jpg

[BOSS]Fenix · RP Expert

He sounds like an absolute bastard :P

The Underdog · Member

Thats why Zell's gonna fight him, because of his quick wits, various weapons, and being able to think of his feet alot. Also he relies on his tech and computers to win battles when Zell uses his head. Long story short, the guys kinda like a computer, calculates everything and doesnt think outside the box.

The Underdog · Member

Ive written my prolog, to AA2, I could post it if u guys want. It features a short introduction of Keiji, how Zell had grown, hints on the potenial power within Keiji and Eevee and finally the explosive battle between Neji and Penance, I think its one of my best fight scenes yet, tho i tried not to make it too explosive since its only a prolog.

[BOSS]Fenix · RP Expert

I'm sorely tempted to see your ace new prologue, but the coldly logical side of me says we shouldn't post anything on AA2 before the first story ends (coz I've got a bad feeling that if we do we never actually WILL finish AA1)

[BOSS]Asreal · Nuisance

Yeah i agree with Fenix. If we start the AA2, we'll never get around to finishing the first one and end up getting confused :p

The Underdog · Member

Then lets finish it! lol

[BOSS]Fenix · RP Expert

Is that everybody done now? If so we just need the missing bits with Tanis, and I can slot them into the story anytime...oh yeah, I have no idea what to do for my "five years later" post LOL Should I bother?

[BOSS]Asreal · Nuisance

I don't see why you have to but it'll look a bit off in the manga with only two outa the four. But you don't have ta do it now.

Lets get on with the second one! XD

The Underdog · Member

U could always jst leave that part out, i jst had a little free time so i added that bit in, it dont have to b gd something like Kobie. Sonya and Eevee going of to visit the elves or something like that

[BOSS]Asreal · Nuisance

SO are we going to start the second one? I'm assuming your going to start it off right Sean?

The Underdog · Member

Ok then, I'll start it 2nite. We doing character cards again? or jst dive straight in.

[BOSS]Asreal · Nuisance

I suppose we don't really need them but you can do them if you want to.

The Underdog · Member

I'll start an extra topic, so the character cards are seperate from the main thing.

[BOSS]Fenix · RP Expert

We already have the character cards do we not? They're either on this topic somewhere or on the Roleplay OOC one.

The Underdog · Member

Oh yeh i think we do somewhere.

[BOSS]Fenix · RP Expert

You know it's kinda ironic that you had Tsunami being targetted as a source of power for Penance as I was going to do the same with Eevee (an Angel with double-Aeon power has never happened before and he wants it LOL)

Oh yeah and what's an Atellian cross staff?

[BOSS]Asreal · Nuisance

Penence could want both Keiji and Eeve cause of their duel aeon power aceness :p lol Just add that randomly in as a plot twist :p Just to screw the pair of you over.

And of course, Fariel dosn't have these problems ^_^

The Underdog · Member

Penance aint gonna know that Keiji exists since he cant see into the elf lands lol. It comes to a shock to him when he finds out Neji has a son, thats one o my little plot twists, its also a shock for Kiba.

Oh and an Atellian Cross staff is a golden staff with a cross on the top like what she is hold here

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/4264/alexialih6.jpg

It has magical Holy properties ofcourse, like super sturdie and able to cut through undead like butter. How she gets it will be a surprise.

-- Edited by The Underdog at 14:54, 2006-11-18

[BOSS]Asreal · Nuisance

Okay cool.
Let's just throw in some more plot chains and twists why don't we? :p lol

Like Larek's girlfriend is Fariel :p RANDOM!