Technically he's naming her after the Japanese word for a tidal wave.
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Captain Thule: We have yet to meet our betters, alien. All we have seen are deluded tyrants, heretics and alien scum. Farseer Taldeer: You should have looked beyond your mirror then.
Okay so you aren't taking all the names from Naruto but a fare amount of your character stuff is ripped off from it. I'm probably gonna have a bitch of a time with copyright in the comic :p Might have to edit it a bit :/
And to make things even worse, Tanis and Selina are one syllable away from infringing on Underworld: Evolution's copyright LOL
No but really they don't bitch too much about it. As the Dan Brown case proved it's perfectly legal to steal ideas, just not the way you write them.
So rip off to your heart's content!
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Captain Thule: We have yet to meet our betters, alien. All we have seen are deluded tyrants, heretics and alien scum. Farseer Taldeer: You should have looked beyond your mirror then.
The Underdog wrote: As for his best men, well his officers they could monsters or humanoids, they could be a soul brought back from the farplain (Kiba), an ancient monster sealed in the demon world or an angry guy or past enemy who hasnt been killed given an upgrade, or even a good guy who helped us in the origanal who gets possessed by Penace. Just go wild and come up with something for you to fight.
I've got one evil boss in mind (probably Eevee's, though he could do for all 3 if I can't think up another 2 for Feyd and Sonya) Evil daemonic bastard with wings and horns and big sharp pointy teeth. I've got a vague idea that he was once Atellian (hence the wings) but joined Penance's evil army and got lots of evil powers, so now he's a horribly mutated demon.
For his minions I was going to go for something demonic/bestial (demon-world Fiends or something) so either going to be super-fast reptilian bastards borrowing heavily from Predator, or bloody great gun-toting tanks who can use bazookas as pistols borrowing heavily from Unreal, just for the sheer hell of using lots of rocket launchers!
Haven't decided.
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Captain Thule: We have yet to meet our betters, alien. All we have seen are deluded tyrants, heretics and alien scum. Farseer Taldeer: You should have looked beyond your mirror then.
If we're going for a big bad boss for each of our Characters i should probably have someone closer to Fariel's line of abilities. I dunno, like a wolf demon kinda thing. They him and Fariel could have a full out wolfy war :p lol Woot! The fur will fly ;) LOL I need sleep x.x The things i'm coming up with shouldn't be allowed out my head.
Any thoughts? Picture quality or lack thereof notwithstanding? LOL
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Captain Thule: We have yet to meet our betters, alien. All we have seen are deluded tyrants, heretics and alien scum. Farseer Taldeer: You should have looked beyond your mirror then.
Neji - Uber Kiba, he has batter control of Sand, the moves he does are the same as Neji and Keijis demon attacks but with sand.
Keiji - Ancient Demon who is also master of maritial arts, he can grow in size and stretch his limbs.
Zell - An atellian master engineer with lots of fancy weapons, his arm will be a mana gun cannon edged with a sharp blade. A long with his tough armor. He has other techs but wont use most of them, eg Granades, he will also have a Gatling Gun which he will use quite often.
Captain Thule: We have yet to meet our betters, alien. All we have seen are deluded tyrants, heretics and alien scum. Farseer Taldeer: You should have looked beyond your mirror then.
The Armor wont b as thick, it will b quite thin and grip to his body. His Mana Gun will be built into his arm. His Wings will be metal, He wont have a helmet, but he will have a mini computer thing attched to his ear and the screen will come round to his left eye, it will be able to detect magical energys and give an assessment of its threat level, it also records the oppents
while fighting someone or watching someone fight the computer automatically records every move the oppent makes, it creates a profile for every person he has seen in battle, after recording battle tactics and techniques the computer tells him of a counter to use. It will look like this
Captain Thule: We have yet to meet our betters, alien. All we have seen are deluded tyrants, heretics and alien scum. Farseer Taldeer: You should have looked beyond your mirror then.
Thats why Zell's gonna fight him, because of his quick wits, various weapons, and being able to think of his feet alot. Also he relies on his tech and computers to win battles when Zell uses his head. Long story short, the guys kinda like a computer, calculates everything and doesnt think outside the box.
Ive written my prolog, to AA2, I could post it if u guys want. It features a short introduction of Keiji, how Zell had grown, hints on the potenial power within Keiji and Eevee and finally the explosive battle between Neji and Penance, I think its one of my best fight scenes yet, tho i tried not to make it too explosive since its only a prolog.
I'm sorely tempted to see your ace new prologue, but the coldly logical side of me says we shouldn't post anything on AA2 before the first story ends (coz I've got a bad feeling that if we do we never actually WILL finish AA1)
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Captain Thule: We have yet to meet our betters, alien. All we have seen are deluded tyrants, heretics and alien scum. Farseer Taldeer: You should have looked beyond your mirror then.
Is that everybody done now? If so we just need the missing bits with Tanis, and I can slot them into the story anytime...oh yeah, I have no idea what to do for my "five years later" post LOL Should I bother?
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Captain Thule: We have yet to meet our betters, alien. All we have seen are deluded tyrants, heretics and alien scum. Farseer Taldeer: You should have looked beyond your mirror then.
U could always jst leave that part out, i jst had a little free time so i added that bit in, it dont have to b gd something like Kobie. Sonya and Eevee going of to visit the elves or something like that
We already have the character cards do we not? They're either on this topic somewhere or on the Roleplay OOC one.
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Captain Thule: We have yet to meet our betters, alien. All we have seen are deluded tyrants, heretics and alien scum. Farseer Taldeer: You should have looked beyond your mirror then.
You know it's kinda ironic that you had Tsunami being targetted as a source of power for Penance as I was going to do the same with Eevee (an Angel with double-Aeon power has never happened before and he wants it LOL)
Oh yeah and what's an Atellian cross staff?
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Captain Thule: We have yet to meet our betters, alien. All we have seen are deluded tyrants, heretics and alien scum. Farseer Taldeer: You should have looked beyond your mirror then.
Penence could want both Keiji and Eeve cause of their duel aeon power aceness :p lol Just add that randomly in as a plot twist :p Just to screw the pair of you over.
And of course, Fariel dosn't have these problems ^_^
Penance aint gonna know that Keiji exists since he cant see into the elf lands lol. It comes to a shock to him when he finds out Neji has a son, thats one o my little plot twists, its also a shock for Kiba.
Oh and an Atellian Cross staff is a golden staff with a cross on the top like what she is hold here